Rid it Right AmericaLogo Design Contest

see below for Friday, April 30th comments

see below for Friday, April 30th comments

see below for Friday, April 30th comments

see below for Friday, April 30th comments

see below for Friday, April 30th comments

See below for Friday, April 30th comments

As we get close to the deadline today, Friday, we'd like to narrow our direction down as follows:

Tini1 we'd like to work with your #124 and your #62. We like the typestyle and check mark of #62 very much. The color choice, the all lower case type and the casualness of this logo work nicely to reflect our brand direction. It is simple yet has a some depth and we believe the check mark suggests correctness which is positive. We'd like to combine this with the circle of design #124's. Could you please remove the word America and combine the type of 62 with the circle of arrows of 124. Either utilize the leaf or the check mark, but not both in your revisions.

Benson we'd like to go back to one of your first designs #88. We like this but believe the arrows dominate too much. They are painterly but have gotten too streaky and distracting, the texture needs to be softened. We like the hand-drawn feel but need to modify it. Can we simplify the arrows and push them back somehow so that the type presents itself first and seen to sit on top of the arrows. We'd like to suggest seeing a version with the arrows almost closing a the loop. We like the green and blue, but not the black. Can we see the word "it" in another shade of green or blue?

ro-k. We like all that your logo communicates so clearly in the emblem-like logo of #137. We'd like to fine-tune what we are seeing in #137 in the following way. We'd like to utilize fewer colors. Particularly in the type. One and maybe two colors for the type, but not three please. We don't want to use black for type. We'd like to see an upper and lower case type style but not the type style of 139. We like the arrows of #137 over those in #139 as well, tho' the center highlight of #139 illuminates the company name nicely. We'd like to remove the word America.

Thank you all for this good work.

@Taylor Tait,
It is generally a good idea to post your feedback to specific designers on their designer's page so that they can be directed specifically to the designer in question. Otherwise, other designers might take your comments as tacit licence to commit another designer's concepts to their own work (which is actually forbidden here at Logotournament). Also, a post directly to a designer's page ensures a prompt email to the designer and a quicker and more directed revision from them to your contest.

edit - I just realized your contest is already in judging mode. This post would probably have been more useful to earlier:)

You may place a favored design from a designer temporarily on Rank 1 and place your comment on his page so that he could submit an updated design to your liking.

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