#62. We truly like this. It is whimsical, fun and flirty. Here are the tough questions. While we like, we are concerned about reducing to an application such as Facebook and/or Twitter. Is there a way of re-addressing the balance so that we don't loose the name when the logo has to be reduced?
Secondly, We are undecided about using America. Rid it Right is easier to scan, but Rid it Right America is a call to action which we are working towards - starting a movement so to speak. Can you look at this or another version with America included? The strength of your design is its easy going nature and grass roots feel. Thank you.
Thank you for your feedback....I will try to rework this to simplify so it'll mesh with facebook/twitter.... and work on a whole new idea:) Thanks:)tini1
Love your revisions. Just to explore a little bit more. Not that this isn't great. Could we see your revision, #76 staightened out without the check.....now that we have the word America included, we are wondering if the check is just too many elements? Love the color palette and the direction you have taken this. Thank you
Hi Tini1 - Here are a few more comments. We are starting to see the elements that we like in a few of the design.
For your designs:
We like the colors in #62.
We like the stacked words but would like to capitalized the first letter in each word
We like the green leaves in the design.
We want to keep the arrows that you have but shape them more around the words. This is where we would like your creativity to come in. Keep the word element the priority. But the arrows are very important.
We think the 'fun' that we asked for in the element of apartment buildings but feel that we may need to move to a bit more of a middle ground. Still have fun but bring it back into a more middle ground (Fun vs Corporate - we want to be somewhere in the middle)
Hi...thank you for your feedback...I am working on revising this, while still keeping the integrity of my concept.....feeling alittle 'stuck'.....will work on some more:)
Dear tini1 We are happy to let you know that we would like to move forward with your logo. There are lots of elements we like in several of your logo designs. We'd like to do a little more work to get the logo exactly how we like it. We hope you don't mind a few more revisions. Here are our thoughts: We would like to combine elements of logos #124 and #174
We would like to see three arrows in the concept instead of two as it is the known symbol for recycling
We like your leaf element, but feel it is distracting from the company name positioned in the upper left hand corner. Can we move the leaf element some place else and reduce it in size? In one of your concepts it came out of the "T"...we like this direction.
We'd like to stay in all lower case type style as in #174. We are a little concerned that "rid" and "it" run together as one word and want to make sure they read as two words.
We are not fond of the triangle dot over the "i" as seen in #124.
We feel that the leaf and the check are too much together so would like to explore the leaf only as mentioned above and remove the check from the logo.
We also are dropping the word America.
We really like the highlights you have included in concept #124. We are hoping you can explore adding the same type of subtle highlights and reflectivity to the typeface. We are looking for just a little more dimension without going over the top.
Thanks so much. Please write with any comments or concerns. We look forward to hearing from you. Best, Taylor and Alicia
1. added 3 arrows 2. type is all LC 3. space added between rid & it 4. leaf maller, moved to top of t 5. highlites added to text (I will also give you a flat version, no highlites)
Hi tini1/missy - my partner, Taylor, posted comments around lunch time but I don't see them so we are checking to see if you received anything in an email directly. If not, Taylor will be able to repost around 6:00EST tonight. Alicia
Hi, I am so sorry for the delay. I posted comments right after receiving your revision. I honestly don't know what happened.
Here's our feedback. The direction is great. We are really happy. We'd like to tweek it just a little bit more and see an option or two before selecting the final.
The arrows look great. However, we feel the type needs to dominate. Can you increase the type point size just slightly so that one's eye reads the words first. At the moment, the value of the circular arrows and the words are similar in weight and we'd like to bring the words forward.
When you take a look at that, you might find the leaf has to get a little bit bigger too...perhaps it can pass outside the line of the circle a little bit more.
Regarding color. Are you using three colors here or is one blue a screen of the other? I am wondering if we can do something similar with the greens? It may not look good, but could the arrows around the words be slightly darker perhaps...it may be too busy and we might find that enlarging the type is enough.
Thank you for the highlighting, it looks great. We'd like to put the shadow back underneath the symbol and lastly, we loved the attitude you gave some of your earlier logos by tilting the design. We would like to do the same here and tilt the design.
Thanks so much. Again, I apologize for the SNAFU. We had meant for this feedback to reach you early in the day.
Hi Taylor & Alicia, if you could announce me as winner, that will be great, and we can work through revisions...there seems to be some confusion(please see general comment area) thanks so much, I will post revision shortly...:)
Thanks for your comments and input. We are torn between 191 and 193 and your thoughts are similar to ours. We are now awaiting feedback from two people we have been working with on our website and who's creative opinions we trust.
I am worried about selecting a winner between these two designs of yours because I am not sure whether we can still entertain both concepts if I do?..I also don't know how many revisions we can make with you before we are toast. :)....or turn into pumpkins...?
That said, I will write to a few of the designers that we have upset and explain our stupidity. I'll wait to hear from you in the meantime and see if you can confirm that if I choose a single winner of yours (which I will).....can we still work between 193 and 191.
yes, you can still work between those(they are the same, just moving elements around)......just choose my design, so we can close this, and work through revsions;)