Hi there. Here's my approach. I tried to aim at luxury and modern simplicity, so hopefully you'll like them. I'm presenting them in both color and grayscale (to show what they would look like when printed with black ink).
I really love entry #131 - the font and graphic capture right tone and would work well with the "Signature Travel Network" logo that will appear on my website and in print. I am going to present this along with a few other top selections tonight at my group review.
Based on the feedback received on other logos, I would be interested in seeing a version where the word 'travel' had a little more space between the letters - not scaling the entire length of "Sunchase" but just a little bit more than space than the current version to give the logo more of a base. Additionally, could you provide a version of the sun graphic in blue, red (cranberry tone?) and green? When I printed out the logos yesterday the one's with a little color stood out the most.
You may want to check out www.preferrednaples.com to see the colors that Signature Travel uses in their logo - doesn't have to match those necessarily, but just use for ideas.
Please let me know if you have any questions. Thanks for these great entries! Dana
Hi Dana! Thank you for your comments and the great feedback. I have uploaded the revisions you requested. If there's anything else you need, please let me know.
Thanks Ed for this new entry and the letter spacing looks great. Could I see three more versions - one that is just red, one that is just blue and one that is just green? Thanks again! Dana
Sure thing. Please check out #157, #158 & #159. Color red isn't showing up well but in real life application it does, something weird happens to the compression of color red here sometimes. Thanks again.
Entry #157 is strong. Can you play with the blue contrast and mix in a bit more light blue or even teal. The yellow version does a great job contrasting and showing the texture. Would love to see the blue with similar variation. Thanks! Dana
Hi Dana. Sorry it took me a while to respond, I was away from my computer. Please check out #181, it's got two shades of blue :) Now, teal looked a little odd in there, so I made one with teal alone (#182). Let me know your thoughts. Thanks!
#181 is great - love to see a 'curve' in Sunchase font as in #177. Is it technically possible to make 'T R A V E L' a little bit 'thicker/bolder' - maybe by just increasing the font just a slight bump?
I definitely like the slightly bolder 'TRAVEL' and I think I like the 'curved' look as well. If selected as the winner, are you open to providing this logo along with the various other colors you've created as well (the yellow, green, etc.)?
I've been staring at these and I like the curved font but the the last E seems to be abruptly larger than the second S (while in #177 it seems a little more gradual). The first S doesn't bother me as much, but maybe it could be scaled a little shorter to make it consistent if you lower the E. Sorry to nitpick here at the end.