Hi Muskitt, thank you for your designs! I like the colors in entry
#11 better than
#13 & #14; however, I feel the abstract part of the design is a little too sparse with not enough definition to translate well to a small label on a jar or sticker later. I like the additional branches on the flame of
#13 as well. The crosses in the designs of
#16,
#17, &
#18 are a little too reminiscent of Christian design patterns...not that I'm opposed to it, but I like the idea of something that is not immediately recognizable and leaves the imagination to work it out. In our original logo, we had many people visualize the flame as a dancing girl, a flame, a vagina (I know), and a shrimp. It was originally taken and altered from part of a Jackson Pollock painting. Anyway, I hope that helps a bit. Oh yea, it is difficult for us to see the work sauces in the logo as the weight of the font is too small and I believe that we will need to differentiate our name enough from our old business so that we are recognizable as "Siam Society Sauces"
Cheers,
Paul