Hi. : ) Y'know... #23 is growing on me... maybe it's NOT too strong, just the colors... perhaps grey and orange(?) would be better... or some more elegant and smooth colors(?) with a smoother font. Grey is best, as it stays the same on a white or black bkg, which is what my website currently does... (bkg is white on entrance, and changes to black when in galleries -- it's a template and un-changeable) Thanks again-
#39 does look awesome... but the 'photography might do better a bit bigger(?) hard to read on my 1900x1200, which a lot of editors have. : ) Thanks again-
Text is much better -- jumps out a you more... I'm very into the 'eye-aperture with eyebrow' symbol/mark as it's the beginning of a real brand -- bit I think i'd be more like me if it were a bit 'softer' and more rounded(?), and the font a bit less 'guy' and a bit more jaunty and humorous(?) I like the text on #22 for some reason that I don't know... BTW-- I hope you would be able to follow up on this design after the contest... letterhead, etc. We will work out the money if I pick your logo, you're into it... please le me know... : ) thanks so much-
Hey, thanks! it still feels a bit too masculine, but I don't know why? Perhaps A) the font needs to be even less powerful-strong-angular(?), and B) perhaps the eye/aperture is too 'Big Brother Is Watching You' -- and might be more effective with less spokes(?) or a softer more rounded -flower-petal-feminine look... without loosing the eye/aperture, of course. Basically I think the same concept, but with a more streamlined, feminine, and less threatening look might be the ticket. (95% of my customers are women on the every-day side, and about 80% on the commercial side.) Thanks so much again. -great work.
Good morning. Great suggestions. I softened the eye by thinning the brow and not angling it down. Looks a lot more feminine. The font is also softer and "curvier". Hope you like it! Peace.