Black Hills Brick Oven PizzaLogo Design Contest

Note to designers: check spelling of "then" in the tagline...

"You don't like our pizza, then I throw a brick at you!"

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Thanks for your efforts!! Mark

Hi there, Bhblindguy,

Just a quick suggestion....happened to notice your tagline, and it has a quality I think you may be aware of. Something that you may want to be aware of.

If you're wanting to tell people "I know you will not like my pizza, so then because you do not like it, I'll throw a brick at you"...then you will want to keep the tagline the same. But, I don't think that's what you're trying to say. :)

You're not telling the world your pizza is inherently dis-likable.

What you're trying to say is, in a humorous way, in an Italian accent, mimicking Italian responses and colloquialisms...that..."...*if* they don't like (your) pizza, then, haha, I will throw a brick at you"....right? :) It's a humorous take. You do not really want to say that your pizza is unlikable.

What it all boils down to is this...

You need a question mark. Because you're asking a question.

If you don't put a question mark in your tag line, you are making a declaration -- a statement of fact -- that your pizza is inherently dis-likable.

So. The way that question mark should be placed....and how the tag line should look is like this:

"You don't like our pizza? Then, I throw a brick at you!"

Also, please note: I have also put a comma there between "Then" and "I"....because it's a pause in speech.

Your tag line is two sentences....the first sentence is really a question. To put both together and try to make it into one sentence is not getting your message across.

Hope that helps. :) I mean, *I* know you're not going to make pizza people don't like and then assault them for not liking a dis-likable pizza.....but that may not be the case for everyone else. :) :) I think the changes to your tagline are really, really needed; it would be a shame if that tagline didn't get to be as funny as it is meant to be, and people didn't get the meaning behind it completely.

Have a great day!

Jennifer,

Thank you for that explaining that. Makes sense. When we use the tag line I will be sure to express it that way. Mark