Interesting perspective on your design i like the effort taken.Are you able to rework your concept and take a look at what is currently out there and fuse your style with some inspiration from the other top ranked designs. Also on the selection of the font still retain the boldness but not extra bold.
I was hoping to give you a new angle and not just copy what was already posted. I appreciate your input but you didn't specify which you were commenting on, #264 or #270