Women's Army Corps Veterans' Association, Saguaro Chapter 68Logo Design Contest

Hello,

I also had an idea for a gold border near the edge and thought I would show you that one as well.

Thank you,
Tim

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Hello,

This is #61 with a thin border around the star.

Thank you,
Tim

(This comment references Entry #119)

!!!!

We want to combine #111 and #55

#111
Please add the border of #55 to it. Keep the green outer border just as is (we like the gradient color change). The inner green border change to black.
Add a thin black border around the star like #55

Can you do the above revision in the original gold color as well?

Hello,

No trouble at all, I'll get to work on that now.

Thank you,
Tim

#127 & #125
Interesting with the circle!

Can we do the changes that I requested to combine #111 & #55 in a circle?

Can we see the star of #64 added to the changes requested with the combination of #111 & #55?

#64 Please rotate the star one point counterclock wise.

THANKS!!!

Will do.
Thank you,
Tim

Hello,

THis is the combination of #111 and #55.

Thank you,
Tim

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..and here it is in the original gold.

Thank you,
Tim

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Hello,

This is the star from #64 added to the combination #111 + #55

Thank you,
Tim

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..and here it is with the star rotated....

(This comment references Entry #137)

Hello,

And, just in case I misunderstood, this is #64 with the star rotated.

Thank you,
Tim

(This comment references Entry #138)

Our favorite is #129!!! We are getting down to the last of our minutes. Please do these revisions first.

#129
Option #1
Make the circle larger and the laurel leaves smaller to only go the horizon (where the mountains meet the desert)
Everything else the same.

Option #2 and #3
Option #1 revisions with...
Please try this with the star of #137 & #136!!!
Make the circle larger and the laurel leaves smaller to only go the horizon (where the mountains meet the desert)

Option #4, & #5
Option #2, & #3 revisions with...
Put a thin black line inside of the green circle surrounding the picture (like in the square #137)

THANK YOU!!! THIS CIRCLE WITH MOUNTAINS AND LAUREL LEAF IS A TOP CONTENDER!

#65 flip the star one point counter clock wise

Hello,

This is the combo of #111 + #55 with an even deeper green which makes the gold pop a bit more.

Thank you,
Tim

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#69
Can you make the black outline around the star ever so slightly thicker?
Can you make the green inside the star slightly darker?

...and with the black in the star....

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...and with the black star rotated....

(This comment references Entry #155)

And with the green star rotated.

Thank you,
Tim

(This comment references Entry #157)

Hello,

Just saw the latest comments.
I'll get to work on it.

Thank you,
Tim

Hello,

This is revision one on #129. Sorry for the wait, I had to redraw part of the Laurels.

Thank you,
Tim

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OUR FAVORITE #129
increase the circle size
decrease the laurel leaves to meet the horizon (the desert and the mountains)

then
add the star of #137
add the star of #136

then
add a thin black outline just inside the green border of the whole logo like in square #135

THIS IS OUR FAVORITE AND WANT TO SEE THESE FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...and with the black star....

(This comment references Entry #162)

SORRY I POSTED OUR FAVORITE TWICE.

DIDN'T SEE THAT IT POSTED AND DID IT AGAIN.

...and with the black star rotated...

(This comment references Entry #163)

This is revision four on #129

Thank you,
Tim

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...and revision five...

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Hello,

This is #65 with the star rotated.

Thank you,
Tim

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!!!!!!!!!!!!FAVORITES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111

LIKE #165 &#164

The laurel leaves seem out of portion...our thoughts
Bring the leaves down ever so slightly away from the circle...for #165 & 164
Bring the leaves up to where the top of the mountains meets the border. So just ever so slightly up.
Thin the leaves out a bit so they aren't so thick, as in distance leaves are from the branch.

What do you think?

Hello,

This is the #69 revision, thicker black border and darker green.

Thank you,
Tim

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Also, revise the leaves on #163, 162, 161 too.

But do the above first.

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello,

I'll get to work on the changes for #164 and #165.
I'll try to redraw the leaves as quickly as I can.

Thank you,
Tim

FAVORITES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

# 165, #164
Put a thin black border around the gold portion of the star

Hello,

This is #165 with a black border around the star.
This isn't with the revised Laurel leaves yet..I'm still working on that.

Thank you,
Tim

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...and #164 with the black border..

I should have the new Laurel soon.

Thank you,
Tim

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Hello,

This is #165 with the revised Laurels.
If I misunderstood, it's no trouble changing them.

Thank you,
Tim

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..and #164 with the new Laurels....

Thank you,
Tim

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This is #165 with the new laurels and the black border on the star.

Thank you,
Tim

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...and #164.

Thank you,
Tim

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Hello,

I hope I didn't miss any revision requests, it was going pretty fast at the end there.
Please let me know of you would like to see any changes on these or if I misunderstood anything.
It's no trouble at all to fix anything.

Thank you,
Tim

I'm going to clean up my entries a little with the old unranked ones if that's alright as I'm confusing myself a bit scrolling through all of them and the comments.
Thank you,
Tim

THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOUR WORK!!! Especially all of the last minute changes once we found our favorite!

You're very welcome.
Thank you for all of the feedback, that was great.
It makes it so much easier for zero in on things with details like that.

Thanks again,
Tim

Please feel free to clean up the entries. We were going to do the same for our Logo Committee.

Thank you, and please let me know if you find you would like any other changes.

#128
Can we see this with the short, plump leaves (to the horizon where the mountains meet the desert)?
Can we see this with the tall, thin leaves (to where the base of the mountains meet the edge of the logo?

#175
Can we see this with gold leaves?

#171
Can we see this with gold leaves?

#173
Can we see this with gold leaves?

#164
Can we see this with gold leaves?

Hello,

I'll get to work on these in just a few minutes.

Thank you,
Tim

Hello,

This is #128 with the short leaves.

Thank you,
Tim

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