they are all just too cartoonish. The fox should be a bit more realistic, more sinister in the eyes to give it the masculine serious look, whereas the smile gives it the playfulness (in addition to it being a cartoon to be playful in and of itself). Take a look at the turtle I posted and the example of the fox posted as well. Maybe it is the eyes that is throwing me off as they are just too big. Also, take out the graphic around the swing. maybe give him a closed mouth smile, stronger ears and snout, and finally if both feet could seem to be touching the ground. also the ground does not need be under him. Nice creativity though.
Nice first attempt, and I look forward to seeing more.
Excellent work on the come around. Excellent revisions. Much, much better.
#20 is the one we will work with from here on out.
I prefer the finishing golf pose, after just hitting a shot, as opposed to the "loaded" pose just before swinging down.
May I see it with a white background. Rather no background at all.
I like it a lot. I will have to think a bit more before saying anything to revise. it really looks good.
If anything, strictly for variations sake, play with the eyes, snout, mouth, and maybe the angle of how he is standing (more back facing, more front facing.)
The fox itself really looks fantastic. Play with any little details and we can go from there.