Well done. I like your take on the fox, and the pose is excellent. The colors also work very well. I would rather see the design without any writing; more character iconic, without the reference to William Robins Design. I like it, but you can certainly play with it as you see fit, you are the expert In that regard. Perhaps play with the angle of the pose. Well done.
Well done. I like your take on the fox, and the pose is excellent. The colors also work very well. I would rather see the design without any writing; more character iconic, without the reference to William Robins Design. I like it, but you can certainly play with it as you see fit, you are the expert In that regard. Perhaps play with the angle of the pose. Well done.
Also, in thinking a bit more. If you were to play with the style of the fox a bit, I would say maybe a bit more masculine though not devilish looking. Hope my feedback is useful. Great start.
Also, I still think it needs to be more masculine somehow. Though I am very fond of its current state. I think that for a broader appeal at a predominately mens club, the character should be more of a "man" so to speak. But I am unsure how that can be better accomplished. Again, good work thus far.
I like #6 the best, but give it the face characteristics in the eyes and mouth as #2. no gloss, no tooth. and perhaps, take a look at the new example of the fox i put up. Though it is to be playful and fun, a bit more serious in the face expression or more of a balance therein may be ideal, and a bit more of the details to make him look slighltly rugged. The whole idea, though I may not articulate it as best I can, is to make him seem more like a him, more masculine.
#12 is by far my favorite. maybe play with the eyes some more and give him a more serious look on his face, similar to the example of the fox i posted. I think the seriousness of the eyes combined with the smile could be the playful, but masculine look that I've been looking for. This is looking really fantastic at this point. Also, maybe play with the shimmer on the coat, perhaps reducing that a bit will add to the masculinity. As i said before, I like the jagged spots on his coat a lot. Keep it up.
13 is my new favorite. I like the added ruffles on the fur. I would still potentially like to see his eyes a little bit angrier, that is a bit les round or better put more of a stern brow. Dont make him too angry, but play with it and see what you get (if you want to of course...I dont mean to sound so demanding...especially as you have put in excellent work thus far.)
Also, up for contention, maybe show me something where he is not looking back at the crowd, but is instead looking down range at where he just hit the shot. That might change the look a bit and would like to see how your fox carries that pose.
Excellent work thus far. You are a true professional, I must say.
when you get a chance, turn the head so that the fox is looking straight ahead in the direction that he just hit the ball. play with the smile from there, be it, closed mouth, or open, try both. Just friendly suggestions. I put the fox up for me to look at and the more and more I glance at it the more and more I would rather see him looking down range as opposed to staring back at me. Also, maybe play with hat on and hat off.
excellent work, again, if I have not said so before.
and perhaps the tail blowing behind him as opposed to tucked in. although if the tail did not exceed the length of the club I think the symetry would be exquisite. Of course shorter is ok too.
in number 31, one minor suggestion, it may be visually appealing if the tail started upward parallel to the angle of the line in his upper back and similarly finished downward parallel to the angle of the golf club, then the tip of the tail can be free to do whatever as you have it already done.
Just an idea to go along with the removal of that very very small shadow underfoot.
#29 - can we put the same untucked tail on number 29 and remove the same shadow underfoot.
I would not say to make any changes, however for examples sake play with the eyes and the mouth. Show a version of both 42 and 40 with less of a smile and sharper eyes. That is, run up and down the mean scale, so to speak, wherein instead of a smile perhaps we have a striaght mouth and perhaps a straight or furrowed brow. Mainly to see any new possibilities.