Hi, hope you can check my revision update, as per the feedback. (Entry # 659 / 660 / 661 / 662 / 663 / 664).
If you would like to see any changes, please feel free to let me know.
Thank you :)
Congrats on being considered a finalist! I just heard from the owner: He would like to see designs in earth tones, in addition to the blue and grey family. Also, he encouraged trying to incorporate natural images: the surrounded area has hills, farms, and trees. Thanks for your work!
I like these updates, but I'm wondering if we can get a version where there's more blue to the right of the middle crossbar of the "E" and the smile across the "A" is a little bolder and without the corners (that fine detail won't translate well to embroidery). Thanks.
This feels like it's really on the right track: The "White" as a kind of cutout of the dark blue block and the different colored "hall." I think the smile needs some kind of adjustment, but it's hard to put my finger on it.
I like the idea of the "W" inside the box with the edge of the "H" forming the right side. I'm not as big a fan of "hall" being a separate color. Somehow the smile over the "A" feels off — like a more symmetrical and balanced smile would be better.
Thanks for your comments/feedback.
Please check my updated versions, Entry #131 / 132 / 133 / 134.
If there anything to change, please feel free to let me know.
Thank you.
This tooth design is too realistic-looking to be approved by our owner. Sometimes abstract teeth work, but this is too on the nose. I like your color choices and font choice though.
I like this concept, but I don't think this representation of a tooth is going to fly with our ownership. The proportions look great, the larger blue box is effective, and I really like the font. Can you play with something other than the tooth? Perhaps make the "W" in Whitehall white inside the blue box?
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I will start working on this revision, based on your feedback, and send you the updated version asap.
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If there is anything to change/update, please let me know. Thank you :)
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How about Entry #327 ? If you like to see any adjustments, please feel free to let me know.
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Please check my updated versions, Entry #131 / 132 / 133 / 134.
If there anything to change, please feel free to let me know.
Thank you.
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