Hi Paulwaterfall Is there a way to change the design with the people in it so that it does not appear that the site is catering to just women? Can you incorporate a family? Or better yet, a couple of families that are connected/sharing?
We love where you are going with this. A couple of comments: 1. The "platter" under each family should be the color of the parents. The family on the right has a "green" platter underneath, the family on the left should not have the same color, but a "blue" platter to match the parents in that family 2. We like the font for the text, but don't like the gradient - it won't show up well. Can you play with different colors and color combinations given our color palette and what you use in the logo? 3. A conceptual comment here - the people on the right look like they are on the "outside" while the family on the left look to be on the "inside". We want everyone to be "inside", from a conceptual standpoint. Perhaps another swish that connects them? Don't know how that would look, but if you could develop this concept to make everyone "inside", that might be cool. One thing we noticed - if you mirror what you have now to the other family, it might look like a heart, which may be too "girly" for us. 4. In the logo, we think that bolder colors that transition from one to the other through the swish would pop better. For example, the colors in #6 appear more bold to us.
Thanks! Great adjustment after our last comments and we are looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!
Hi, Thanks for the feedback. Here's my entry #27 #28 Concept is the same and simple two swoosh connected two family..but this design is too common i think, so i give you the more complex and not common idea #29 #30 #31 , the same as #14 but add a swoosh over the right family so its not outside the circle but inside and still connected to the left family. I'll add more color variation. Thanks Paul
We like where you went with this, and the red "feedback" swoosh.
Another thought - don't know if this would be any better, but may be worth a shot - if the swoosh went up between the two families, over the right family and around to the underside of the right family. Might be worth seeing what that would look like compared to the others.
#49 I've add element of fun family, you can see by the hand of the family, and i add the tagline to show you how it would be like. Thanks, any comment is welcome. Paul
We really like the yin/yang idea, but are worried that the families will not show up well - that they'll end up too small. For example, on a business card we are not sure how well they would print out.
You are nailing the concept of an iconic logo, though, so we encourage you to keep submitting.
Hi, Thanks for the comment. I change the circle of family from my previous entry so the family look larger #61 And i change the yin yang a little bit so there's a feel of 3d there.. #62 Thanks, i'll bring some more idea. Paul
We like were this has gone. We're wondering if you can take #63 and rotate it either 45 or 90 degrees clockwise. We've noticed the red swoosh looks like an "S" in the current orientation, prompting the question, "What's the "S" for?"
Really like the new 3D offering, too. Maybe flip the border around the "front" family to match the one around the "back" family?
Hi, Thanks for the feedback I've made some adjustment #65 and #66 i've rotate it as your request. #67 #68 I've made adjustment to the border of the yinyang, so it would not be seen as a broken circle. Thanks Paul