I'd like her to look a bit stronger and perhaps to see more of her. My goal is to eventually have her in various workout poses, so I'd like to see her whole body.
It would take changing of her pose, but is it possible to show her lifting a barbell?
Is it possible to change the aura around her to be a kettlebell?
I revised the expression on the gal, made the ponytail thicker and longer and added more shading and detail, especially to the face and hair. I also gave her a little more muscle. :)
#39 - the aura was turned into a kettle bell #40 - added the aura back in #41 - partial close-up of figure #42 - full view of figure
I'm still working on the barbell pose. It's very late right now and I have to get up early and get to my job, so I will finish that pose and upload tomorrow evening. Thanks in advance for your patience!
Entry 42 looks great! Now, how do we incorporate "VixieFit" and "pretty powerful" in with the complete Vixie character?
In terms of accomplishing that, I like having a kettlebell in there, but can I see what I'd look like if the kettlebell was more solid. Not an aura of a kettlebell, but an actual kettlebell.
Also, maybe "VixieFit" being outlined in metal as well as the kettlebell outlined in metal.?.? With the kettlebell being possibly bigger to help encompass more of the full Vixie is possible too.
Also, with Vixie standing, this may limit the detail or require the logo to be too big because of the vertical dimensions being so much larger than the horizontal dimensions. If she were sitting with legs to the side, the dimensions might work better to allow for more detail and a logo more like entry 39.
I realize this isn't what you asked for in your feedback. I just worked this up real fast on my lunch break and thought I'd go ahead and get it in front of you.
I will create the revisions you asked for this evening when I get home from work - re-posing the figure and creating the metallic kettlebell and text will take a while longer.
Again, thanks for your submission! Great stuff! Can I see "Vixie" as she is standing in between the words VixeFit, but the foot that is up in example #2 is actually resting on top of a barbell with big plates loaded on either side of it. I would ideally like for her foot to be resting on top of the middle of the barbell. The plates on the barbell are silver, like the weights in her hands in the above image. Can you remove the weights from her hands and have the left arm (if you are looking at the screen) flexing as if to show off her guns, and her right hand resting on her hip?
I like the fading out of the test of VixieFit at bottom. Can you make Vixie all purple, Fit all black and both fade out towards bottom with silver outline like that of weights instead of green outlining the text?
Here are the revisions based on your feedback! I added the barbell and positioned her foot on the bar. Removed the weights, and changed the coloration of the text.
Let me know if there's anything you'd like changed on this entry. Thanks!
Love...Love this!!! Looks great! I just have one thing I would like you to change a little bit, can you make the plates on the bar bigger and black. I have attached a picture below to give you an idea of what I am talking about...
I changed the plates to black and made them larger. Are they large enough? I was hesitant to make them even larger, because i didn't want to completely hide her feet. Your thoughts?
Hi Pam, really like the logo. Can I see her with ever-so-slightly more bicep and lighter skin like Entry #62?
Also, not sure how this would be done, but is it possible to make her look a little younger without messing with the image too much? It's not super important, but I feel like she looks a little old for some reason....
Thanks for the feedback. I've adjusted the figure accordingly: lightened her skin, gave her more bicep, and rounded her face a bit to give her a younger look.
Let me know if I should lighten her skin more, etc. I'd be happy to adjust wherever necessary. Thanks!
Thanks for the revisions. I like the new weights and the new look. I'd like her skin a little bit lighter like Entry 62. I think it makes it easier to see her (and I'm a bit pale too!).
Also, I like her shoes. I'd like to see even just one of them if I can. BUT, I don't want to shrink the barbell plates. I realize that this makes things tough, but maybe you can figure out how to show one of her shoes.
Another question. Obviously, it would be separate from this competition, but I have a question about putting Vixie in other poses. My goal is to have one primary design, and also having other images of Vixie doing different exercises. E.g. "See Vixie Deadlift"...with an image of Vixie deadlifting the barbell.
An important part of choosing the winner will be having a designer that can show Vixie doing these other poses. Is this something that you could do? Not right away, but there will probably be 10+ additional poses/exercises that I will need to put Vixie in. I was going to offer the winning designer an additional $50 per custom design. And again, these designs will probably be requested over a period of time.
Please let me know if these terms would be acceptable to you as the winner.
I'll lighten the skin more, and adjust the design so at least one shoe shows.
And yes, I can definitely do other poses for Vixie. I've done numerous figure illustrations over the years, and that's what drew me to your contest. I'd be happy to do more work for you. Your price per custom pose sounds reasonable to me.
I'll upload the revised design as soon as I finish it, which should be very soon.