Great logo! I wonder if you could try a version where you integrate the words "View Park" more into the logo itself? Take a look at this logo on the Chicago Neighborhoods page. There are a lot of similarities: http://thechicagoneighborhoods.com/Oriole-Park
Almost. Entry #89 is the best balance. Only they look like tall buildings.
Let's try this. I uploaded a file called Montecito.jpg. Try creating a vector drawing of that image, black and white with some disappearing edges. I want to see the roof, and don't worry about the brick, you can make that clean. REMOVE THE BELL, and let's keep the arches of the window.
The walls should be white. The outlines of the windows should be black and 3D. Same with the roof. Place it all in a box.