Entry #5 --This is very well drawn, and we like the richness of the colors and the prestige factor they convey, but it is too formal and static and doesn't capture the excitement we want. Also, we don't really want designs suggesting a trophy, because in any race the trophy is not awarded until after the victory lap. We like the shading in the words Victory Lap, but the word Hobbies does not contrast strongly enough with the background. Please try again.
We received a sketch drawn by one of our own people. It shows the i in "Victory" as the arm and hand of a driver, dressed in firesuit and gloves, holding the checkered flag aloft as on a victory lap. We would like to see you submit logo designs incorporating this idea.
#s 49 and 50 -- These look good. We will not be re-ranking the entries until sometime tomorrow when we see what other entries using this idea come in. Meanwhile, can you do a similar one with just the words "Victory Lap", deleting the word "Hobbies"?
Hi Contest Holder, Here I made a revisions without Hobbies, and also in one worg "victorylap" as you like to see #53 #54 #55 and #56 . I hope that you like it . Please tell me for anything you like to see then I will provide it. God bless!
We think #53 is the best concept we have received so far, but we need to refine it. First, we need to make the arm more clearly a letter L. We would like you top make the L a letter in the same style as the other letters but with the horizontal part of it under the A and the hand gripping the flag extending out of the top of the vertical part. We would also like you to make the lettering a rich gold color with a black border. We would like the tapered stripe and the little checker logo at the bottom removed to simplify the logo finally, we would like the entire logo to have a black border with a gold border outside it. We would like the gold border to be wider at the right and the bottom to give the logo a 3-dimensional effect. finally, we would like to add the word "Hobbies", similarly colored and bordered, as a separate element at the bottom. This will allow us to use the logo with or without the word "Hobbies" and to move it to any position around the main logo so we can fot it into spaces of different shapes.
Hi Contest Holder I just uploaded now the revision as you like to see, #70 , #71 and #72 . i hope that you like it . Just tell me anything changes you like or something missing then i will fox it . My internet is back to normal now . I hope that I got all you want. .God bless!!!!!!!!!!!!
Entries 70 and 71 -- These are closer to what we are looking for - well done! Can you make the gold color brighter? Also, The arm is closer to what we want but we meant for you to make the L a letter just like the others except that the wrist and hand of the driver, holding the flag, comes out of the top of it. We also want the horizontal element of the L to run under the letter a with the a snugged up against the vertical part of the L. We also would like the gold outline to run around the entire logo and be wider all around and wider still on the bottom and right sides of the logo. You should delete the checker graphic at the end of the Y and make the word "Hobbies" a separate element that can be moved around in relation to the main logo or not used at all depending on the size and shape of space we need to put the logo into. You might also try one with the L, incorporating the hand, a different color from the rest of the letters.
Hi Contest Holder, I made a revision now, please check what is missing, and just tell me anything changes then I will fix it. #78 , #79 , #80 . God bless!!!
#78 -- you've almost got it -- We need you to make the horizontal bar between the bottom of the Y and the bottom of the P into the horizontal part of the L and then move the left edge of the A up against the vertical part of the L. Also, can you make the colors more like the ones in the #2 ranked logo and make the gold outline wider and solid around the entire perimeter of the logo (but still wider on the right and the bottom than on the left and the top)? We need a clearly defined black outline around the logo and then a more clearly defined gold one outside of that. This will make the logo usable against any background color, light or dark. And can you do a version with the above changes and with the flag less tapered and with fewer and larger checkers?
Hi Contest Holder , Here are my revisions . I hope that you like it . #88 , #89 and #90 . I hope this is the right one that you like to have. Just tell me anything changes you like so that I can fix it . Do I need also to make a black outline version? God bless!
Regarding withdrawn revision --If you are the winner we can do whatever we like with colors after the contest is over. The important thing is that we have seen your design in colors similar to what we are looking for. We really like #s 98 and 100. Please add a gold border around the entire perimeter of #100 as in #98. Make it the shade of gold used in #98 while leaving the colors of the logo itself the same.
Further comment: Please add to #s 98 and 100 the word "Hobbies" in the same color and style of lettering as a separate element that can be moved to various positions around the main logo. That is so we can place it either below or to the right of the main logo or not use it at all depending on the shape of the space we need to fit it into.
Hi Contest Holder, Here are the revisions , #104 , #105 , #106 and #107 . Just tell me if there are any changes you like to see then I will fix it . God bless!
The difference between 102 and 102 is in #101 there is a thin , light gold border in black while in #102 there are thin lighter gold bolder in both font and black border.
Wednesday, June 18 -- We want to let everybody know we have been out of communication since Monday due to an Internet service failure. Now that our service is restored we will get on with the judging phase of the contest.
We have made a screenshot of your design and modified it using a simple drawing program to show you what we would like the final version to look like. You will see that we have simplified it greatly. We would like you to make the word Hobbies all capital letters and make it the same height as the words Victory Lap. As soon as we get it drawn as described above we should be able to wrap up the contest. You can see our modified image at:
Hi 3wards , I have made a revisions #116 , #117 , #118 #119 and #120 . I hope that one of them is the one you like to have . If not please tell me more about it so that I will fox it right away. God bless!
Hi 3Wards , I made it now , #121 , #122 and #123 . I hope this is the one you like to see. I removed the tail of the H in Hobbies, also made the vertical of a and L points sharper. I hope this is the right positions , but if not just tell me then I will fix it . God bless!
Hi 3wards , I made it now , #124 and #125 . As you said to make the lower left side for the L pointed instead of rounder, also remove little right the Hobbies. God bless!!!
Hi 3Ward. Thank you very much for selecting me as winner. I am so happy with the result. I already uploaded the final artwork now . If you have any changes , just message me here so that I will fix it and its not a problem
Finally , may I ask you to click "Approve" link under My Account > My Ended contests ? because this is very important for me . Thank you very much once again and God bless!