it all look great! now you make it very difficult to decide between your works!
1. i adore the icon. it is a keeper. 2.font - i really like the first original. it is clean. not too presumptuous. 3. dividing up and cload. it looks estetically better, but i fear that people wont get that it is one name.
Since i am not a designer, i have no idea how to make it better. without destroying the beautiful thing you have done.
what do you think are the weaknessess of the original?
I have just printed it. and the bubbles are not to be seen. how can we make the figure visiable in regular print? without the bubbles it is not the same thing can you change the font to - without fadeaway? the top is also not see good.