Trust Life TodayLogo Design Contest

I like the people...let's stick with that for now, although a tree or branches is more what I'm looking for. I'd like to see the font be more script-like and preferably all lower case.

Ok!Thx for your feedback.
We will do further

#5 - I'd still like to see you work on this one. Instead of the leaf and person, could you try a very simple tree? One that incorporates branches on one side and leaves on the other?

#4 - Keep the people, but please change the font and make it all lower case.

Also, could you try both entries with some different colors and fonts?

Hello!
At your request, we have developed a logo, which combines a few ideas.
As you can see, it is the idea of a tree that you have requested.
Also this tree as it is intertwined with the figure of a man that can be represented as branches.

(This comment references Entry #24)

Thank you very much for incorporating my feedback.

#24 - I like the way you incorporated the idea of a tree, but take the man out all together. The man makes me think more of life insurance, and this is a spiritual message. I'm still interested in this design, so please continue to refine.

I think you're really onto something with entries #25 and #28. I like them both a lot.

#25 - it's pretty darn good just as it is. Perhaps to help me see if differently, could you try longer branches? Also try a different font and different colors within the font? As I said, I do like this one very much.

#28 - this one could easily be my favorite if you could change two things. 1) I like the "t" - how it looks like a person. Could you perhaps refine the "t" to have more of a curve on the bottom (just a slight curve...I still like that it looks like a man's legs), and also change the rectangle on the t that looks like a person's head to be more of an oval shape? 2) the main issue I see with this design is in the word "life". The "lif" is hard to read. It looks more like "hf". The li together really look like the letter h. Perhaps a different font would correct that.

Thanks for your continued effort. I've very pleased.

Ok! Thank you for your comment. We continue to work

Thank you very much for continuing to refine.

You were right with your first approach to the branches/leaves...less is more. I like the simple branches and leaves (like #25) more than the more intricate (#45). Go back to #25 design on future entries please.

I like the changes you made to #42 (rather than #28). Much better...thank you.

Wow! I really like your work on #44. Very "Fresh". :-) I wouldn't change a thing about it. VERY nice.

Thank you for your continued effort. I keep going back to #5...I really like it. i would like to see the slogan added though.

I have two slogans I'm working with:
1) It's bigger than you...
2) It's just that simple...

Now, as far as placement, it may be difficult for me to explain, but I'm going to try. I would like the slogan to start UNDERNEATHE the l or the i in the word life and wrap around the word life, with the "..." finishing up above if possible.

Another option would be just to get creative and show me how you think it would look good. :-)

I don't want the slogan to start off before 'trust life'. I want trust life to be first, more important, than the slogan.

Please try with both slogans. I'm very eager to see what you can come up with. Thank you!

#42 - please also update the slogans as mentioned above.

Please try some different fonts for the words 'trust life' and also different color combinations. I still like this one very much.

Thank you!

Hello!
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No worries...I understand the time difference.

Along with incorporating both of my feedback items above, I'd also like to see the font a big larger on #5. Thank you!

Several options in the color combination, a variant of the logo, is surprisingly, very well with any background.
Also, options with different fonts.

In particular, like to draw your attention to the options:
#105
#102
#110

You are getting so close...thank you.

Okay. #5 - favorite font. Keep that font, just enlarge a little bit please.

#5 - try separating the words "trust" and "life" just a little bit. Also, try making the olive branch out of the "i" instead of the "l"

Also, to #5, try adding the slogan like you did in #103, but write it in the reverse (I hope that makes sense). Meaning, the slogan will start UNDER the L or I and wrap it's way UP, past the E.

Thanks! I'm going to be away from my computer for a little bit, but will check back ASAP.

So close! They look great!

#5 - try adding "...it's just that simple" under trust life, but don't change anything else. I like THAT font, and I like THAT size. Please make this one entry.
#5 - try adding the slogan to wrap around on #5 (like you did on #118, but have it create more of a circle (the word "that" in the slogan is too close to the letter "e" in life). Please make this a SEPARATE entry.

#118 - like mentioned above, the slogan wrapping around is too close to the letter "e" in life. Please make it circle around a little more, creating more space in-between the slogan and the e. Also, on the same design, please make the person and the leaf bigger, like on #5. Please combine these two suggestions to make ONE new entry.

Thank you!

Oops, you wrote the wrong slogan. I'm looking for "...it's just that simple". Please do underneathe, as well as wrapped around.

I'll try and be super clear.

Only use #5. Don't change anything about it, only add the slogan to it. What I would like to see you add is the slogan, "...it's just that simple". I want to see two separate entries. One entry with the slogan underneathe. And one entry with the slogan wrapped around like you did in #118. (If possible, when wrapaping around, please make the word "that" a little farther away from the letter "e" in "life"...they tend to run together when I look at them.

Thank you very much for continuing to refine!

Sorry for the mistake in the slogan!
The more I work, the more confused, my fault.

#127 and 129 look great! Please remove the quotes from both slogans.

#129 - start the slogan under the letter "l" in life please, and continue to wrap around from there..

We're almost there! :-)

Wow, you killed my me in a good way;)

:-) Thank you for working so hard on my revisions. :-)

As you know, I REALLY like your work. #133 is near perfect.

I'll be candid. The reason I'm not 100% sold on it is because I feel it needs to have a *stronger feel* to it. I'm not sure how you do that, and I apologize for that. Maybe it means using black to give it a stronger feel.

I don't want to send you back to the drawing board over and over again...I'm just not 100% sold. Luckily for you, my friends love this one, so I keep trying to tweak it. Don't misunderstand me, I like it a lot too. It just needs a little extra something to make it a bit more *bold*.

Bottom line, in making it have a stronger feel, it's because I want people to REMEMBER it.

Thanks SO much for your continued work and patience.

Yes, of course I understand everything.
Choosing a logo a serious matter which must be treated very carefully.

Thank you for your understanding.

I will be away from my computer a lot today, but will be checking in as often as I can. Thank you for the new designs. I will rank them as soon as possible. They all look very nice.

I just wanted to let you know that I updated my contest brief with some specific ideas of what I'd like to see someone try with the TL (the *last* T in trust and the L in life).

This is a very different idea than what you have been pursuing, however, I wanted to draw your attention to the new comments I made in case you're interested in trying a different design.

Thank you.

Yes, it's the only idea on which I have not worked.
Well, we'll try.

Thank you for offering to try. I am very interested to see what you come up with.

I like #179 and #180 very much! Thank you MeFresh! Looking good!