I like the idea of 9, but it doesn't look professional enough? Is there a way to you can take it to the next level in this regard, to make it communicate premium?
Your 16 is a real contender! I'm glad that you re-submitted.
Needs: 1. We need the wording to be bolder. Look at some of the other logos and make some adjustments. 2. Please provide some variations on the image as well - we just want to see some other options. On these lines, some of our thoughts were: Could it be smaller and fit in between the words? Could it be a watermark? 3. Try some bolder colors, such as pink.