Stuck to emblem logo, was unsure about poster influence. Circles reflecting tyres and aerial image of coffee cup. Reflecting coffee through colour and vintage through picture of car within emblem. Also displaying the blend on the front, and with each blend a different car. See next one..
Nice. I like the different cars representing the different blends. That's something you are the first to do. I feel that the blend stripe though coming across the image lessens the presentation. I hides the car image which I don't like.
The Camaro should be the track day blend, the "formula" car should be the Race day blend. What do you have in mind for the Rally blend and the "High Test" espresso? High Test refers to high octane racing fuel. The premium strong stuff to help you out.
These are great package execution but don't quite have the inspirational feel that I think someone would want to wear on a t-shirt whether they drink coffee or not (hopefully they do).
Revised designs. These the coffee is reflected in the "coffee stain" around the outside. Tried to make it more T-shirt worth too. Rally Blend and High Test espresso are yet to be drawn.
These latest submissions are an improvement from the standpoint of incorporating the key points. However, I think they are a bit too busy. Especially with the flags. I think those aren't really necessary. I would prefer a classic rally car silhouette than a modern one. (e.g. http://www.flickr.com/photos/8605089@N07/762933356/)
Your original design had a really nice classy look to them. You lost some of that with the latest iterations. Great work though!
Thanks. Upon reviewing your submissions I still feel that your original design has more class to it. I think the design lost something in the evolution.
Still not quite there. sorry! Not sure what the details are that make the difference but I still like the original the best except for the blue stripe.