Town of Bethlehem, NYLogo Design Contest

We really like where you are going with these- can you try some different colors or a slightly lighter green?

Like the colors and look, but not sure what the bars imply ... therefore prefer #32
for both of them, I don't get why the M is different?

dear contest holder
thank you for the appreciation
The bars aren't implying something just supporting the words :)
this font has this strange look with the M
here are some updated entries with different colors and fonts
I hope you like them
entries #38 #39 #40
If you need revisions please feel free to contact me
kind regards
Tzina
lotus creative

Like the concept. Can we see some variations on raindrop size maybe not capturing all the smaller symbols.

Also would like to see other symbols included such as but not limited to (bike, light bulb, building, roadway, pedestrian walking, etc.)

Hello
thank you for the feedback
here are some updated entries with different colors and fonts and combination of the elements
I hope you like them
entries #76 #77 #78 #79 #80 #81 #82
for adjustments please feel free to contact me
kind regards
Tzina
lotus creative

Like #81, but dont like the bars/buildings. Replace with a bike symbol and maybe add a pedestrian.

For #80, we like a darker green look for the tree and light bulb. Again replace bars with a different symbol.

Thanks.

Hello
thank you for the feedback
here are revised entries with adjustments
I hope you like them
entries #97 #98 #99 #100 #101
please feel free to contact me for revisions
kind regards
Tzina
lotus creative

We like numbers 98 and 99. Would you please tweak the following components and submit revisions for review:

-Use a CFL bulb instead of standard bulb
-Incorporate pedestrians (Two people walking)
-Incorporate a recycling symbol
-Play around with the coloring of "Sustainable Bethlehem", Use daker colors (Green for Sustainable, Blue for Bethlehem)
-Play around with different font styles (No cursive)
-Like to see what the title would look like with lines above and below the title (like #26)
-Take kite and children playing out of all future logos
-Liek to see biker in different color than purple (darker color)

thank you :)
i am working on the revisions
kind regards
Tzina
lotous creative

dear contest holder
thank you for the great feedback.
here are some updated entries just to make a start on the adjustments you requested.
#146 #147 #148 #149
Please feel free to guide me to the direction you like in order to be completly happy with the logo
kind regards
Tzina

Ok based on the latest revisions, we would like to go back to #98, but with these modifcations.
-Add a walker/pedestrian (we do not like the mother/child shown in latest revisions).
-Use the letter coloring and style from #148.
-Use the darker colored biker like one used in #149.

Once those revisions have been made, we would like to see it as stated above and one or two revisions trying to incorporate a recycling symbol.

dear contest holder
thank you for the feedback.
here are revised entries with the adjustments you requested.
#150 #151 #152 #153 #154 #155 #156 #157 #158

Please feel free to contact me if you need modifications
kind regards
Tzina

just to let you know that you can choose any versions of the logo you like.
I can provide you these since are versions of the same logo

Lotus,

Thank you for your continued help. We have just a few more things we'd like to see from your logo.

Could you use the layout of #153 but remove the recycle symbol and utilize a more lifelike pedestrian at the same scale as the biker? Thanks.

thank you
I am working on it

dear contest holder
It's a pleasure to participate in your contest
thank you for the feedback.
here are entries in which I have design lines in a certain way to give the impression of the pedestrian in order to be in accord with rest of the design :
#159 #160 #161 #162
Please feel free to contact me if you need modifications
kind regards
Tzina

Hello Tzina,
We plan to select you and image #98 as the winner of this contest. We just have two minor edits that we want to know if you can make and if you prefer to make them pre or post official award.

Again, we like #98, but would like to use the FONT for Sustainable Bethlehem from #157 and we would like for you to use the color for the biker that you used in #157, but keep the biker in the same location on #98.

Let me know if that makes sense. you can also email me directly at klundgren@vhb.com.
Finally, when we award, we will be looking for you to provide image #98 (as amended above) in the following formats:
.eps, .jpg, .ai, and .png

Please let me know if this will work for you.
Thanks!
Kim

dear Kim

hello and thank you.
I enjoyed working for your logo
here are the modifications you requested #163 #164
Absolutely I can provide you the formats you requested and any of the variations of the logo you like.
The program that I have use to design your logo is Coreldraw

kind regards
Tzina

Thank you! Are you also able to do .ai files and .png files? Please advise.
Thanks!
Kim

Tzina,

On the logo we really would like to see a pedestrian, at the same scale as the biker. if the position of the pedestrian could be on the right side of the light green wave that would be great. What we want is a more realistic looking pedestrian, the previous one is too blocky for our tastes. We'd like to see a figure with the life like characteristics of the people shown in numbers (#148 & 99). We want this person to look like they are walking. We want it to portray the action of walking. Please let me know if this is doable thanks.

dear Kim
no worries, of course I can provide you with the adjustments
I will work on it and sometime tommorow I will e-mail you the modifications.
kind regards
Tzina