#46 B, although these three entries are not to our liking we really appreciate your effort. Three comments: "THE" should be designed in a larger font, and we don't want MOTO to be designed like a motorcycle or any part (like a gear), and we don't like this particular font you used for CHANNEL.
#45 Refer to #46.
#44 Refer to #46.
How about try this for a simple approach: we like the font Speed Channel uses (check speedtv.com to see it). Why don't you use that font (or close to it) including the tilting of the letters, and make MOTO a different color from THE and CHANNEL, and make all three words the same size font.
Although we are not looking for a slogan, the one you came up with is pretty good. You should save that for a future contest.
Also, tomorrow we will be posting a page on our website with some motorcycle images that should help you to design an appropriate Pictoral Mark (instead of trying to make the words look like a motorcycle). We will post the link in the Contest Discussion below. Thank you.
#51 Good! But sorry we weren't clear. We like the font of Speed Channel, but without the red background. We don't want any colored background anywhere on our logo. Please resubmit this entry with no background, and with "THE" and "CHANNEL" colored red. Thanks!
#50 Refer to entry #51 feedback. Please resubmit this entry with no background, and with "THE" and "CHANNEL" colored red. Thanks! Thanks!
We have posted on our website examples of motorcycle art that we feel capture the action, passion, and excitement of motorcycling (which are the top three things to communicate through our logo) in order to clarify what we are looking for in a Pictoral Mark.
We think that IF you design a similar image (remember that you are not limited to these examples), it should be located to the left of the words, as they each depict a motorcyclist moving to the right, which would draw attention towards the words "The Moto Channel".
Please do not feel limited by these examples. We are open to any and every suggestion you might have. Thanks!
#53 and #54 Just noticed that the letters appear crowded together. Can you please space them out more. There shouldn't be any letters touching. And then you'll need to put more space between the words too. Thanks! Also could you please do one additional separate entry (based on #54) with the fonts having a Web 2.0 look? We're thinking that might look good after all.
#53 and #54 are incomplete because they are missing a Pictoral Mark. We will not rank any entry without a Pictoral Mark.
We have posted on our website examples of motorcycle art that we feel capture the action, passion, and excitement of motorcycling (which are the top three things to communicate through our logo) in order to clarify what we are looking for in a Pictoral Mark.
We think that IF you design a similar image (remember that you are not limited to these examples), it should be located to the left of the words, as they each depict a motorcyclist moving to the right, which would draw attention towards the words "The Moto Channel".
Please do not feel limited by these examples. We are open to any and every suggestion you might have. Thanks!
#102 Thanks for adjusting the letters as we requested, the Word Mark looks better. The Pictoral Mark however shows no action. The motorcycle looks like it's not moving. Please refer to our page on our website which clarifies what we are looking for in a Pictoral Mark.
#157 and #159 Thanks for the effort but the Pictoral Mark has nowhere near enough definition to it. You can see the entries that we have ranked near the top have definition to the rider, his goggles, his arms and legs, and the motorcycle's engine, tires etc., Yours however is just a silhouette. It's definitely late to receive this feedback from us now but you presented this entry late. Thanks for all your efforts and good luck in making a final late entry based on our feedback.
#200 Very good Pictoral Mark! We like it. However, due to the small size of the sample it is difficult to see the details. Could you please submit a separate entry with just the Pictoral Mark (motorcycle & rider) as entries #192, #196, and #199 have done.