I don't know if it will be suitable for the BRANDED LOGO... but I think they would make AMAZING BUMPER STICKERS!!! Seriously!
I see that you are a new-comber on here, Colemanator. Your work is brilliant and I want to make sure you get recognized.
How do you win a ribbon? I'm assuming Gold-Silver-Bronze if 1st 2nd 3rd place (obviously).
By the way... You can still compete for a top spot here... Hmm.
I really like #43 because I can see some people NOT GETTING that the golfer guy is the "I" in "invisible." We get it... but some people are stupid. lol.
I also REALLY like the Green.
I wonder how it would look with: A) A red flag B) If you put a black border/outline (or something) around the letters? Maybe even a black border around the whole thing?
It might look dumb. I dunno. I would love to give this sticker another dimension... and playing with the letters is the way to do it.
I love the Upper/Lower case change. And the small "the" is exactly what I wanted. Can we make it a CAPITAL "T"?
I invite you to tweak and tinker whatever way you see fit. Thanks for your efforts here! Definitely an original to the contest!
We're coming down to the wire here. The feedback I'm getting from people I show it too = that the first thing they see when they glance at the logo is the word "VISIBLE" because the "IN" is made smaller.
Anyway you can move the word "THE" somewhere where it doesn't shrink the "IN"?
If you could do that.... and perhaps play with the following variations: #58 with all white letters #58 with white letters... and the words outlined with a *thin* black line
Then you have a legit shot at the Top 3-5.
Thank you for all your work on this! If you keep working on LogoTournament? You're going to be a top dog on this one day soon.