The Forgiven SonsLogo Design Contest Logo Design Contest Contests / The Forgiven Sons The Forgiven Sons has selected their winning logo design. For $300 they received 117 designs from 13 different designers from around the world. Find out how LogoTournament works How LogoTournament works Contest Entries by Joop Return to Contest Return to Contest 2nd #114 5th #82 Withdrawn 10th #37 Withdrawn Prefers others. #117 Withdrawn Prefers others. #116 Withdrawn Prefers others. #111 Withdrawn Prefers others. #110 Withdrawn Prefers others. #108 Withdrawn Prefers others. #107 Withdrawn Prefers others. #105 Withdrawn Prefers others. #103 Withdrawn Prefers others. #102 Withdrawn Prefers others. #97 Withdrawn Prefers others. #96 Withdrawn Prefers others. #80 Withdrawn Prefers others. #79 Withdrawn Prefers others. #78 Withdrawn Prefers others. #71 Withdrawn Prefers others. #70 Withdrawn Prefers others. #69 Withdrawn Prefers others. #65 Withdrawn Prefers others. #47 Withdrawn Prefers others. #46 Withdrawn Prefers others. #45 Withdrawn Prefers others. #44 Withdrawn Prefers others. #39 Withdrawn Prefers others. #38 Withdrawn Prefers others. #33 Withdrawn Prefers others. #32 Withdrawn Prefers others. #25 Withdrawn Prefers others. #23 Withdrawn Prefers others. #22 Withdrawn Prefers others. #21 Withdrawn Prefers others. #20 Withdrawn Prefers others. #17 Withdrawn Prefers others. #13 Withdrawn Prefers others. #10 Withdrawn Prefers others. #7 Withdrawn Prefers others. #6 Discussion Joop Logo Designer Hebrews 9:22 (New American Standard Bible) "And according to the Law, one may almost say, all things are cleansed with blood, and without shedding of blood there is no forgiveness." AMEN BROTHER!(This comment references Entry #6) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer "THE" added, changes to banner...(This comment references Entry #7) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer on black background(This comment references Entry #10) 15 years ago GoNorth Logo Designer Glad to see you can reuse those wings, Joop. 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer haha, I drew them way back... the last 2 logos I used them on was a no go! 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer a version without blood on the cross from getting his side pierced(This comment references Entry #17) 15 years ago ratso Client Can you do #17 without the circle and with gold wings like in #10? 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer With the changes you asked for... anything else, please let me know!(This comment references Entry #20) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer same as what you asked for but made the "sons" and verse in black.(This comment references Entry #21) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer black letters, more gold in wings(This comment references Entry #22) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer gold cross(This comment references Entry #23) 15 years ago ratso Client Can you take out the word "The"? Originally, I wanted it in the logo, but now, my group has decided that it's just "Forgiven Sons". Thanks! 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer Simplified concept, though I do miss the blood and the verse...(This comment references Entry #38) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer blood added(This comment references Entry #39) 15 years ago ratso Client Can you add a little color to 38 and 39 ... maybe a red cross like one of the other guy's? This one has some potential too. I miss the verse too. Maybe we need to try it somewhere. Don't want to get it too busy but I did like the scripture reference. The blood is good too ... will is show up on a large embroidered patch? 15 years ago ratso Client I'm not a graphic artist, but what if you put "Forgiven Sons" on the top banner of #38 and #39, then had a small banner at the bottom of the cross which had the scripture reference? 15 years ago ratso Client Can you do #33 without the "The"? 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer 33 without "the"(This comment references Entry #44) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer forgiven sons in one banner, verse below(This comment references Entry #45) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer no verse, red cross... this officially is the most revisions I have done in any contest! I should cool down... there is more than a week left!(This comment references Entry #46) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer Ok last one for now... verse in the cross(This comment references Entry #47) 15 years ago ratso Client Thanks for bearing with me, man. Sorry about the numerous requests. I can tell though, that we're kind of on the same wave link. I appreciate the work you're doing. 15 years ago ratso Client After visiting with my other club guys yesterday:Can you take #45 and make these changes..."Forgiven Sons" will still be on top, but with more arch. Doesn't have to be a banner. Most motorcycle groups just have their name on an arched patch. The middle will be the cross and wings, but can you try a cross similar to the one in #56 (but doesn't have to have the circle thing in the middle).The bottom rocker will be a bigger arch too, and it will now say "PS421".If you look at a motorcycle club's jacket, they really have 3 patches. The top rocker is the name. The middle is the graphic (cross and wings in our case). The bottom rocker is something else, in our case, the verse reference.Hopefully, this makes sense. We're getting close.Thanks! 15 years ago ratso Client My fault. There's one other thing. The top arch needs to be in a font that is bigger and bolder than what you currently have. We really like the font in #34. 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer changes made... took a shot with the font and the stitches... let me know what you're thinking(This comment references Entry #65) 15 years ago ratso Client Nice changes. If you can, try this...All caps in the top rocker ... FORGIVEN SONS. Also, maybe make the wings gold, like some of the other designs. Might have to make the background on the arches black or something else if we make the wings gold? Don't know what other background color might be good. I'm open if something grabs your eye.Keep the current version too. It's getting close. 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer Different font(This comment references Entry #78) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer and yet another(This comment references Entry #79) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer more arch to the top and bottom patches. Brighter red cross. If you want to see different fonts just say so!!!(This comment references Entry #80) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer back to the banners(This comment references Entry #82) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer bolder letters on top(This comment references Entry #96) 15 years ago ratso Client Jesse:I really like #96. I know you're tired of making changes, but could you try a couple more things? I'm wondering if there are some crosses that are still this basic style, but with something else to make them not quite so basic? Some of the guys have used crosses with circles in the middle, or crosses with different cutouts, etc.Also, what about using some other colors ... maybe orange, some sort of blue, maybe some silver in the cross and/or wings? Just something to get a little different look.Don't know if any changes will make a difference ... but we thought it might be worth a shot. 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer exaggerated cross(This comment references Entry #110) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer the outline on the letters made it less legible, it was removed and letters now black(This comment references Entry #114) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer banner added with the Latin letters meaning... "Jesus of Nazareth, the King of the Jews."(This comment references Entry #116) 15 years ago Joop Logo Designer the INRI banner on top of the cross... while still keeping the design simple and uncluttered yet effective.(This comment references Entry #117) 15 years ago