Hi, Here are my first submssions #82 #83 One abstract and memorable mark which can symbolize Phoenix for example... or can be anything else full of energy and in the movement.....
#83 I'd still like to see something less sharp and more fluid. When describing your image for Brand New Media I used the words "poured metal" I'd also like to see it with a white background and color instead of silver.
I really like the colors in #92 but I think I am staying way from my initials unless they are used in a very eye catching design.
And after thinking about it all night I would like you to enter your Brand New Media design into my competition, if you don't mind.
And if that isn't enough work I would be very interested in anything new you can come up with. I know my contest doesn't have a lot of time left but anything you can do will be greatly appreciated.
#98 @ #99 looks fantastic. Thank you so much for working with me. My only comment is that the purple is such a subdued purple that the purple in "fan" pretty much blends into the black of "addixx". The red really stands out but I think as a group i like purples better.
I like the layout in #103 but the purple in the word "fan" still isn't quite right for me. With purple being lighter "addixx" looks to bold. I also don't like the "a" being capitalized. Lets try a couple of new things:
1 lets try #103 with blues instead of purple, 2 lets keep the purples but make the other text a dark grey 3 lets try the reds again, but a little more richer shade (less pink)
I don't mean to be so picky and I really appreciate all your hard work. Thank you very much!
No quite there yet on #152. I really think if you just take the beak of of #117 and round it out just a bit it will work better for me. I like the new color combo on #154 but lets stick with the blues.
This one and old one idea, have something what I think that is most important part of any artist. And that is inspiration. The both ideas can be viewed also from this aspect.
I like #165 but it's not there yet. In #83 you have the design to the left I think I like that better. I would also love to see #83 in the shades of blue and more fluid.
#173 and # 174...nope not quite what I was thinking, but I really appreciate you trying. I think we should stick with the free form wave that is currently ranked #1. on #159 where we cut off the beak is a little blunt. Can you try something that makes it curl back toward the wave?
I appreciate all the time and effort you have put into this for me. Thanks!
I agree with you! I just made it to show how it works in all other combinations. First ranked version is the best for me. But you need to make final decision :)