hi Wookasheen, we like a lot of your designs! We have some requests for changes we'd be interested to see:
#5 - could you try centering and justifying the word 'software' under Syncopation?
- try different colors, a bit stronger?
- we are concerned about the overlapping translucent colors creating additional colors, in terms of printing and costs. do you have any comments about that?
- could you try making the squares into rectangles?
- in a separate iteration,m could you also try putting the rectangles above Syncopation, so it is a 3-line design?
- can you show us how the logo would render in B&W?
#19- could you try changing the font? Try an all-caps font for Syncopation
- could you apply more kerning to "software" so that it occupies more horizontal space (but not completely justified)? We are interested to see an equivalent amount of whitespace in the upper left and lower right corners of the logo
- could you try having a much lighter presence to the word 'software'?
- could we see 'Syncopation' in a different font that does not have overlapping letters?
- could you try stronger colors please?