SWEEVZLogo Design Contest

example #2

Thank you for submitting your idea. It's very nice. The colors are lovely. We have some requests and suggestions:
1. We don't want a black background. One reason is, we will want to use this logo in b/w, so ...
Another reason is, it's too restricting. That black square makes it hard to float the logo in a space.
2. We want the logo to show what the product is: it's for children, it's a blanket with sleeves used for comfort and warmth, so kid's hands are not restricted under a blanket. The name should be easy to read.
I don't know whether you saw the rough idea we sent. If you did and you didn't like it, fine. If you didn't, it showed kids "popping out" of the "W" and the "V". The kids can be just squiggles suggesting arms and heads, They don't have to be pictures of real kids. Just a designy kind of kid.
3. The log needs a TM in a circle.
I hope we haven't discouraged you by all these "suggestions". I think you've made a good start. Thank you!

to all artists: Thank you all so much for your charming, wonderful entries. My partners and I are looking at them to give you feedback. This is going to be a challenging job. We'll get back to you tomorrow. Thank you again!!! Greytgroup, Inc.

Extended: Client would appreciate more ideas.