Sustainable AthertonLogo Design Contest

Ignore the above comment and refer to this instead please:

Overall:
-Make the full circle green border again and keep the white behind the text but make the bottom solid orange.
-Remove sun
-Cut the train railing so it's much shorter so you can see the tracks more

Variants:
-Can we some versions with touches of color popped in? Maybe some yellow in the sky? We just want to see it brightened up a little.

Can we try going back to the original green border and solid color beneath Sustainable Atherton? Can we try solid orange with white text in the bottom with the tagline?

Alright, here is some feedback and requests!

Overall, can we try:
-Adding in more color, maybe a sun with touches of orange and yellow to mix in with the blue
-Remove the tree on the left behind the building, use that space to make the train tracks straight and more defined

For some variants can we try:
-Removing the grass
-Playing with making the bottom tagline area colored in

Thank you! For both this and #62 could you try stacking the tagline so it fits in the bottom space better?

Thank you for your feedback! I've updated the design with the circular layout #62.

Could we also see this one in a circle layout?

Looking good! Could you try out some color variants using the colors from the brief/what you think looks good?

This is a great start, thank you! Could we try:
-Compressing the design a bit so the name is bigger and the scene is smaller
-Making the tree more like the scrub oak