This is a nice step forward in
#10. I'm still not quite feeling the typeface. The type in
#2 might be closer as it's slightly bolder (though I'm not a fan of the heavy stroke weight). I do like the treatment of the coiled "g" in
#10. It's more distinctive and simple than its counterpart in
#2. Your choice of color makes me wonder if I properly described what we're after. Entry #12 is closer to what we want ... bold and warmer (though even
#1 doesn't quite have the shade of blue quite right). I think you're making some interesting inroads with your entries. They just need to be rolled into one and iterated a few times.