#64 Remove the cross from the eye on the book and make the mouth more pronounced. The book doesn't see, it speaks, so emphasize the mouth to make the meaning clearer. You might try removing the eye completely for contrast. Change the color dot over the "I" in Speaking Books to blue and remove the cross - it distracts from the icon. Remove the tagline - too long and small, can't read it. Make the book fit in its blue bounding box. Try a design with the words "Speaking Books" placed to the right of the brand mark, with the word "speaking" placed over the word "books". I'd like to see this design with two other font selections.