Speak Your VisionLogo Design Contest

Hi,
Here's my first entry for your logo. Please let me know if there is anything you would like changed. I'd be happy to make any revisions you might want. Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #79)

Hey there, that's a lovely first attempt!

I really like the colours, and I love the stars everywhere.

I think it looks a bit complicated with that blue object inside the purple one. Is it a mouth inside a mouth? or a mouth inside an eye?

Maybe try it just with the purple object, and remove the blue one. You could try a purple mouth maybe, with stars coming out of it...

Cheers
Tahnee :-)

Hi,
Thanks for the feedback. My apologies for not making it clear what I was portraying in #79. It was supposed to be a mouth inside an eye. The purple was the eye, and the blue mouth inside was taking the place of the iris of the eye.
Here is a revision of that first entry. I deleted the purple eye, and enlarged the mouth to balance the design.
Let me know what you think. Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #84)

Here I changed the mouth to purple.

(This comment references Entry #85)

I omitted the mouth and replaced it with the purple eye. Feedback welcomed and appreciated. : ) Pam

(This comment references Entry #86)

Hey there, good work. I like #85 the best. I like the purple colour you've used.

I think if you're going to have a part of the face next to the word "speak" it should be of a mouth. If it was next to the word "vision" then it should be an eye. So the word matches the image.

I do love the little stars that float out of the mouth.

I guess my only concern is that the mouth is too girly or cartoon-ish, as if the brand was for a lipstick ad or beauty product. Is there another way to draw it?

Or, I wonder if it would be worth exploring decorating the word "vision" instead and using the eye...

Cheers
Tahnee :-)

Hi,
Thanks for the feedback! I'll rework my designs and submit for yourreview.
Thanks!
Pam

A different idea I had - I made the 'V' in Vision into a person speaking his/her vision. Let me know if you want any changes. Thanks! Pam

(This comment references Entry #118)

This is the same as #118, except I enlarged the 'V' figure/Vision and stars for more emphasis and movement. Let me know if you'd like to see any color variations on this. Pam

(This comment references Entry #119)

Hey there, I really like how you've done the word vision. And I like the colours.

But the writing is so swirly that it's hard to read. Can you do the words "Speak" and "your" in a more simple font that is less swirly and more striking?

Thanks!
Tahnee

Sure, I can do that. I'll make the changes and resubmit. Thanks for the feedback!
Pam

Hi Tahnee,
Per your request I changed the font for 'Speak your' to something more legible. Also enlarged the 'V' figure somewhat for more visibility. Thanks for the feedback!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #148)

A slight variation of the previous entry. Moved 'Speak your' up and reduced 'your' slightly for a little more balance. Let me know what you think, if you'd like a different font, etc.. Thanks!
Pam

(This comment references Entry #149)

Hi Tahnee,
This is a modification of # 149. I added some gradients to 'your' and 'Visions' for a little more glitz/punch.
Pam

(This comment references Entry #150)

OOh I LOVE #150! Will have a think if there is anything else I want you to do with it.

OMG I don't know how I'm going to choose between all these beautiful designs, now they're all coming to fruition!

Well done,
Tahnee

Thanks, Tahnee! I'll keep trying different variations. Just have to make it even harder for you to choose! LOL
Pam

Hey Pam,

#150 is still my favourite of yours.

But at the last minute, my marketing people have told me I need to emphasise the word "speak" more than the other two words! In fact, they want me to emphasise the word "your" the least! I'd like to try it out, to see if they are right...

Can you think of a way to do that? If possible, I'd love to keep the way you've drawn "VISION". But you might think of something even better.

I look forward to seeing your ideas!

Cheers
Tahnee

Hi Tahnee,

Here's a revision of #150, with the emphasis on "Speak'. Let me know if you'd like any changes.
Pam

PS. Will be out of town this weekend for a graduation. I won't be able to make any revisions until Monday morning.

(This comment references Entry #306)

In this revision of #150, the word 'SPEAK' is all caps, and I also adjusted the placement of the other words accordingly.

(This comment references Entry #307)