These ideas are really neat, although we're not sure if the graphic in #5 and #6 is purely abstract or if it has references to the optical and dental sides of the business. The compound S's may possibly benefit from colour?
#5 is very good, but could we try a different typeface? The graphic detail is a little lost because it's small - if it was larger could the text, or part of the text, be inside?
I just uploaded 2 revised designs. One with the type within the graphic and one like #5 but with a different typeface. Please be patient as the designs will not post until tomorrow. Thank you for your feedback!
Thank you for your help so far - this design has been one of the favorites from the start As part of the final decision process, we have to consider how the logo can be modified to deliver the key parts of our business. As we stated earlier, laser eye correction will be the main part of the business, and so its logo must have impact when compared to other providers on a web comparison site. Similarly, a dentistry web site should show our logo as relevant to that business. Could you review your Space Healthcare design to give us an idea of how these concepts could be developed? The laser business would be branded as 'iSpace' or 'eyeSpace' The dental business would be 'dental space', or 'space dentistry'