Sojourn TeambuildingLogo Design Contest

#63 #64
really handsome graphics but not strong (masculine?) enough for the corporate world. Would be a beautiful non-profit logo.

This is very NICE. In the fading light of this contest my last hope is for a crazy shot at COOL.
Thank you and good luck,
Philip

Hi Philip,
Thank you so much for your feedback.
This is my new design, I hope you like it.
Feedback are very welcome.
Regards

Kodox

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My new concept.

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My new concept.

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#144 is hot, hip and strong. great idea! Please make orange into yellow and font is too futuristic. Also little stronger in outer border of badge
Love this

Thank you for the feedback Philip.
I'll work on it now.
Regards

Marsel

Also, (although gorgeous) the dragon body may be slightly overwhelmed by the wing which lessens the impact of the S. Unless (crazy) the wing could be T for teambuilding which would be pure sexy

The revision.

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The variation.

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The revision.

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#166 thinner metal border with black outline same stroke as font size

This may be totally wrong but if dragon faced other way the wing could become real T so it would be ST. would that work? Love to see it.

The border.
I try to move the wing on the right.
thank you for your feedback.
Regards

Kodox

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Ooh that looks terrible. My bad. Get rid of border or make it thinner or lighter

can we try the dragon flip so the S dragon reads then the T wing?

also I liked the shadow underneath the badge

The revision.

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Flip dragon so he faces left and his wing make the T

Flip the dragon.

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Oh I get it if you flip the dragon the S is backwards duh forget it

#183 just flip dragon back, my mistake.

lol.
I think that at first place.
I try to make the wing as "T".
Thank you for the feedback.

The Revision.
Thank you for your feedback.
Regards

Kodox

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Ok crazy idea, is there a way to integrate a sword silohette to the right of dragon as a T? That might work...

Ooh, try this! Make the T of teambuilding a sword. That might tie it in because it would be next to the badge.

ok, that's really great idea.
I'll work on it.
Thank you very much four suggestion and feedback.

Regards,

Kodox

With sword.
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Regards

Kodox

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I think it might be too busy. Let's see the sword on the teambuilding T
Really really nice
Good job
P

Sword on " Teambuilding "

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Little bigger with sword
also try on with sword yellow as dragon

Bigger sword.
Thank you for your feed back

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Congratulations! I am very happy with my logo and appreciate your work throughout the contest. It is a logo that carries an Idea as well as being really Tshirt cool. It is also a very strong masculine graphic which attracts corporate organizations. Great job thank you.
I will send this around to peers and get feedback and make little adjustments as needed.
Thank you for your hard work and talent,
Philip Folsom
Sojourn Teambuilding

Just need to address those flat looking spots on top and bottom and done!

The Revision.

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another variation.

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