Hi Lapinoonette! tks vm for your designs and being the first to enter! i like the idea of using the cogs in the design however, unfortunatley they make the brand appear more cheap looking, rathter then the upmarket/expensive look that I am going for ...
When you take the cogs out of the design, I am left with an aerial type font that is just too simple - i hope that helps you refine your design.
tks sophie :) i like what you have tried to do here ... i am not a big fan of the block you have used to put the words skin in, and the e's as three lines i think are difficult to read ... its along the lines that i am looking for, but is missing something ... i hope that helps you.
tks sophie - haha, yup skin engineer is going to be number 1 - good thinking + you know how to win me over haha!!! :) this design reminds me of chemistry/alchemy; putting all sorts of random things together to make gold! i cant believe how far you have come since your first design - its amazing! #253 is my favourite out of your current designs, i do like it + v much appreciate your creativity, but its just not what i had in mind for skin engineer because i dont think it will gel with my target market (25-35yr old men) and i think they need something a bit more masculine and easy to read (not that im talking down about men - thats researched fact!)
it is very chemistry inspired so i appreciate it thou... if its any consolation, i feel like printing out #253 and putting it up in the lab to help furhter inspire me :) i hope this helps you revise your design
Thanks again for the time you took to comment! I did my best.. and will try to submit something else if i have other ideas. Anyway, good luck with your products and i wish skin engineer to be really n°1 :-p