tks kristen - i appreciate the thought that you have put into your designs ... i am looking for a bit more masculinity/strong design - the logo has to jump off the packaging; maybe a stronger use of bold text or different font for #22?
tks for your design kristen - i think that its a bit too immature for my target market which is professional men aged 25-35, i appreciate that you have had a go at doing something different thou - and hope that this feedback helps