#18 Thanks for continuing to work on this. Text looks more "corporate" now (this is important to fit with my market - unfortunately!). However marketing font size is too small making it hard to read. Fern is too big in comparison to the text size and the slight curl at the end of the frond is pointing away rather than into the text.
#18 Interesting to see this on a grey background. Looks good however see other comments on your design number 17. "Marketing" gets lost here and would be an issue if I had to use in monochrome print options.
thank you for the feedback, might i add the photos arent saved in a high quality which is half the reason the lettering is lost, and blurred. will get on to it!