Client selected #34 & #20 as top two with some interest in #5 out of 9 logos submitted. Good Job! Only concern on #34 was not being able to read S in Signature as well as in SP logo. Use #34 format and try some other script fonts. Use the script font from #5 in #34. In the SP logo - separate the two letters just a little. #5 - loose the feather - and try a more simple approach - using one line below and above.
Direct from client - "Play with #20 and #34. Everyone liked them (I liked #34), but could not read the S in the logo or in the word. If you can find an S that looks good and is legible I think we have a winner. Also, see if you can play with the S in number #5 and remove the feather over the house. FYI- The color is perfect!!"
I am in EST zone - would love to give some updates back to client by end of day today (4/8) - we could wrap this up in next few days.
Use the script font from #5 in #34 . #5 - just loose the feather - keep rest of design same - and try a more simple approach - using one line below and above.