Sermon BrowserLogo Design Contest

my first entry to your project

(This comment references Entry #8)

Thanks for the entry! However, it's not one I like, I'm sorry. I think that's partly because it feels 'static', and partly because the icon in the speech bubble looks at a glance like a sad face :( not a person.

Brighter colours might help, or perhaps a change to a more 'active' design.

another concept

(This comment references Entry #9)

Most of the comment about #8 above would apply to #9 with the additional comment that #9 is a bit too 'simple'. The combination of the font and icon are not sophisticated enough. I also wouldn't want the idea that the speaker is "above" the audience.

Thank you for your feedback. Here is another concept.

(This comment references Entry #10)

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(This comment references Entry #11)

#11 is better, but I still prefer the other entries. I'm not entirely sure why, but I think the others are slightly more elegant and sophisticated.

revisited my earlier entry and modified it. What do you think of this one. Thx for your time.

(This comment references Entry #12)

another concept

(This comment references Entry #13)

another concept

(This comment references Entry #14)

Thanks for the new entries. #13 is the best of yours now, but I still prefer some of the others. I think the colour still makes it look too cold. Perhaps two colours, some shading, or a different colour might help.