I'm drawn to entry #29 and would like to see how it would look if the Second Nature text was all the same green color and the second line was in all black. Appreciate any insight into what you were trying to portray with the images in entry #27 - 29.
hi Brian... thanks for your feedback and your ranking :) I sent two updates with the changes that you asked for please don't mind to ask about any other change that you want bests fermat
Thanks for the quick changes. Wanted to see if in the image you could switch the order of colors so it would be orange then green and then tie it it in to your design #29. I want to see how the alternating colors of orange and green look. One last small change would be to lighten the font size on the word Second so that only the Nature word has a thick font.
hi Brian.. thanks again :) I'm sorry for the delay... but any time I tried to send the website was offline I sent some updates #83 reversing the color of the two figures #84 like #83 but with thin "Second" #85 like #85 but with more thin "Second"
I appreciate the changes you have made. I would like to see how entry #85 would look with the following revisions:
For the first line, use a serif font with the same weight for both words. Have all the letters capitalized with the beginning letters slightly larger. Change the color of the word "Second" to be more orange (looks reddish on my screen) and change the word "Nature" to a slightly lighter green tone and remove the gradient so it is all one color.
On the second line, change the color to the same green color that you select for the word "Nature".
From a symbolism standpoint, what are you trying to convey with the image in entry #85?
hi Brian, thanks again for your feedback :) I sent some updates following your instructions #126 #127 #128 #129 126 and 127 with gradients and 128 and 129 with plain colors
about the symbolism I tried to create an icon of two "person" symbolized with the two colors that you wanted... as you said: green for nature and orange for energy... also I tried to create a shape that was "dynamic".. metaphor of movement, transformation... the "bodies" also have the white line that creates the effect that the body of the persons are like leafs.. to symbolize the nature... remarking the two parts of the person... the body and the mind (circles).... also the shade of the "heads" have a circular gradient that gives some kind of light that comes from inside
I appreciate all the revisions you were willing to make to the design during the contest. While entry 129 is ranked #1, there are a few tweaks that I would like to make to the font and the colors. The image is just fine and needs no work. I would like to change the serif font to the font that was used by the concept in rank #3 (hope its ok to do that now that the contest has ended). In addition, I would like to change the colors of the first line to the color of the orange and green at the middle of the image. Hope that makes sense. I don't need multiple iterations, just one to make sure we are on track. Let me know if you have any further questions.
#157 using the same colors of hte #129 ranked first until now #158 I used the colors taking them from the imaginary line across the concave part of the body #159 I used the colors taking them from the imaginary line across the end of the "white" line in the middle of the bodies as the orange gradient is from light to dark from down to up in the first case the orange is darker and in the second is lighther... the opposite for the green I hope that you understand what I mean
hi Brian yes, during the judging period you can ask about updates of the logos... what is not allowed is to ask (neither during the contest) to copy concepts from other designers.... as the fonts are not protected and the Trajan font is very usual and actually don't change the main part of the logo (the icon) is allowed
Great to see it all come together. Entry 159 is the font and look that I was going for. I need to have one final review of the concept with an associate and that will take place on Friday evening (PST). I will follow up after the with any final tweeks or file requests.
Thanks again for the work.
Sincerely, Brian
PS. Glad I didn't violate the tournament design rules with the last request.