There's something about your style that I like. Not crazy about the 3 bullet points on the left. Could you try making something like the big R connect to a big L and small o's for RoLo.
Hi Fernando: I liked your first try better (#1). I like the way you outlined the R. Can you try to have the right leg of the original R become an L? Lori
Sorry, Fernando...it's not working for me. The big R should go. If you want to try again...something a little more conservative, but not too traditional.