this is a good starting point, i like the colors. The name should be in all lower case, also might try the RL in something lest swoopy. Previously had not suggested this because of my concern about infringing on Ralf Lauren.
all lower case now. by the way what do you mean swoopy? If I understand you right, you want them less curvy? If you want a Sans serif sort of RL then that won't work. It needs to have those curves for it to work.