Ready Set Row Team 2017Logo Design Contest

Juanm - after thinking about it- I think the text looks too much.... how would you make it if there was only "Ready Set Row 2017" on it and then another version where it said that and also "I AM the storm" but no other text

OK WORK ON CHANGES

Hey Juanm, sorry I must have typed it wrong the quote on the shirt should be at the top "A voice echoed in my ear: 'You're not strong enough to withstand this storm." Then at the bottom it should say "And today I whispered: 'I AM the storm."

The rest of what I wrote is just information for you, i don't want it on the shirt.

Ok through these private messages is how you can help me as it became public one of these messages that was addressed to me. Thank you for your attention

Sorry how do i do that?

Thanks for the feedback. Can you support me in sending comments privately Thanks

See comments I left- new quote and the top part at the top of the rendering. Then i want the girl to exude confidence- she doesn't need to yell (I changed it) she KNOWS she's a badass.

Ok, I work on the changes.

This looks too soft- I want it edgier. I don't like it in a circle and look at the Ready Set Row font- it's blockier, scrappier - this looks too curly cue especially the waves- way too feminine.