Thank you for the updates (
#308,
#309,
#310)
These designs feel a little less certain of themselves. We do appreciate the updated shape in
#309 and
#310.
#310 is probably better in terms of cohesion, but we still want to explore the idea of the dots doing a GRADUAL transformation from the icon to the text. Basically, we want to take your original concept in
#72 and make it more developed.
Have you thought about a different alignment to the icon than just centering it above the text? Maybe it looks better if the orange is pouring onto a different portion of the text. Also, try having a smooth transition from a silver area to an orange area of the icon. It's important to keep a 3D look, though.
Our favorite part about
#310 is how the orange lines have a very natural, organic flow to them. We really like this sort of fluid transition. How can you modify
#310 to look more natural? The black space between the silver pieces doesn't feel good. Try also playing with the shape and make it something besides a square, like we have been asking repeatedly.
Also, please let us see your logos on a white background to make sure they work.
Time is running short, so we're hoping to see your final designs soon. We should have a decision ready by the middle of the week. Looking forward to your submissions. Thanks, Giant!