Hi
Thanks for the comment. New entry
#58. Included the words as you requested. Also changed the islands contour shape to be less abstract, as it was looking a bit too smooth in my opinion.
The tagline realy balances the overal picture and gives the whole logo more 'body' to put it like that.
What excactly do you mean with edgy? As some people mean it as in more rugged or grungy, while others say it like they want it more unexpected, surprising.
About to Tasmanian Government logo, do you want to go more in that direction with the overal look and feel of the design?
Best regards
Bramovic