Thank you for the submissions. Very elegant. I like #243 for the way it plays with the white space. Not so sure about the surface effect ... file looks pixilated and both rough and "slick" as a metallic reflection. #242 is cool, but a little fashion/perfume oriented. I really like that font though.
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. For #243, the pixilation is part of the design - a nod to "new media". However, if you would like to see a viariation without the pixilation, please let me know. As far as #242, that would make a killer perfume label!
Please let me know if you would like to see any changes or how I can improve these for you.