My proposal for your brand. The idea behind the logo-mark: flux forming an abstract letter p, with '+' mark incorporated into the symbol. Hope you'd like it. Feedback would be much appreciated. Thank you.
#146 - really like this one. Can we make the disintegration at the top of the P more pronounced? Also more of a smooth and longer transition between the individual blocks and how they become part of the whole. Also, let's deepen the shadow a little. Please simplify the type (look at some of the other top contenders for ideas) I think this design would be better if the type was one color and their was slightly more space between positive and flux.
#161 Thank you. We like the font, but are not married to it, so if there is another you think would look good, please recommend. Thanks for doing the mark with the two different tightnesses. We definitely preferred the tighter one, can you try tightening it up even more? Also, a few of us would like to see the mark in different color schemes. Sorry, that this is a lot, but we really like what you've done.
Thanks for all the different varieties. We still like #161 the best (I guess that's good!) We liked the treatment of the P in #169, with the little slice through it (its nice and subtle) although it appears to be a little shorter than the other letters.
Thanks for staying up so late to do this. When you wake up if you get a chance to try one with the top of the mark wrapped a little tighter (lower) we'd like to see if that improves it or not.
I had to finish working...hope you'd like my new revision. Please, ask for any additional changes. Look forward to your feedback. Thank you. Kind Regards, Sandra
Thanks for the updates. We like #259 the best of that series. Can you please cause more open randomness near the top ( like #176) spread them apart, some missing, etc. You did this pretty well in #255, but it appears to be leaning over - keep the balance.
Thanks again. I was not clear in my last request. We have three adjustments to request (since your logo is currently in 1st place, I understand you can send updates):
in #264, would you please expand the shadow to include the 3rd dimension of the mark?
in #264, would you please add a TM at the end?
After those changes are made, would you please try another version with orange in place of the red, so that the blue and the dark colors remain (this is just for a test)?
These are very good. The next step before we make a final decision is to take them to the printer to ensure that they can be accurately reproduced. I just want to get their feedback.
We expect to make a decision tomorrow.
Thanks for everything you did, I know you worked very hard.
We've reviewed your beautiful design with our printer and he liked it. We'll be awarding first place to you soon. Before we do, would you please modify #309 so that the word flux is a little closer to positive. They should still be two words, but they seem a little far apart.
We like the higher position of the words - thanks.
Also if you can show us the words with and without a slight shadow, that would be great.