What if you were to reverse the credit card - go horizontal and not vertical? Then you could add 4 sets of four embossed random shiny GREEN digits on the credit card. Since the PlasticCoupon will be randomly mailed to millions of people, there will not be any custom names on the card... only random credit card numbers which cardholders need to log onto our website in order to activate the PlasticCoupon.
Also, what if you were to start the Going Green & Saving Green (and maybe even the PlasticCoupon name - start off with a very light green color and progressively go darker... as in going, going... GONE completely green. Focus on making the card look more like a credit card (black mag strip across the horizontal top, not vertical bottom. So keep the card as it is, just shift the mag strip, and add shinny green digits across the bottom... four sets of four digits, 16 digits total. I really love the reflection of the card on the bottom... very clever!
The last two you did are moving away from our vision. You changed your original too much... including the colors.
Just take your original design (#8) and place the black mag strip across the "top," horizontally, not vertically. Keep the position of the card as it is.
Then, after you shift the black mag strip to the top and across, lighten the flower and place four sets of four numbers across - 3/4 down from the top, 4384-5583-9593-2686 (These are random numbers and look better than all zeros.
Ok... one more thing... with respect to the slogan, Going Green & Saving Green, start the letters white and progressively go to light green and conclude dark green.
To recap, keep the #8 as it is... do not change the design. Just modify it. Move the black mag strip and put it across towards the top of the card, lighten the logo on the card, and then place four sets of four digits (as above) 3/4 down from the top of the card. Use dark shiny green numbers. Change the slogan solor shading from light to dark green.
#46. You moved the embedded credit card position... put the credit card back into it's exact position as your original design, and work the changes into that one. It needs to be set back where it was.
#55. You've done well. With respect to the slogan, start the color off with the same color white you used in the word plastic... and then go progressively green to match the same color green in the word coupon. Well done.
#164. #163. #187. #188. #189. #190. Take out a crisp $100 bill, and compare the color to that. We're talking dark green. Please revise all... we are so close!
Hopefully, these are closer but let me know if you want me to tweak them further. I don't want to make them too much darker or they won't show up well on the black background. Also, if you have a specific hex/rgb color in mind that you want me to try please let me know. Thanks
#163. #164. Hello... if you are chosen as the winner of this contest, we will need both designs, with and without the credit card image. Are we clear on this?
#163. #164. Sorry... they would not allow me to place the same designer in Gold, silver, and bronze place, or you would have taken the entire enchilada. ~Sebastian