Paladin ProjectsLogo Design Contest

#103 I like this but the red graphic doesn't have any relevance to our business.

I would like to see the red graphic represent a Knights helmet in an abstract way.

Maybe this could go behind the text (not just above it?)

Thanks

Hello, and thank you for your feedback.

#103 was an attempt to simplify my earlier entry, #98, which itself was an attempt to create an abstract knights helmet. Maybe it would work better if I reverted to the #98 graphic and placed it behind the text, as you suggest?

I'll experiment with some ideas and post a little later in the day.

Regards,

Steve

I know it's a little off-brief, but I was working on #104 during the 'Open' phase of your contest and ran out of time.

It's an image that is associated with both knights and construction.

Is this a theme you like and might be interested in exploring further?

#107 I really like the composition of this one. I kike the watermark type image behin the text. Thanks

My only comment is that I'm not really getting the Knights helmet for the graphic (looks a little more tribal?) I think it has too many curves. Graphic is to look serious (not cartoonish)

If you have a chance, I would love to see some alternative helmet graphics that are a little more recognisable.

Thanks

#103, #107, #108 perhaps a comb (ie Mohawk style brush) on the top of the helmet would make it more instantly recognisable also.

Regards

I take your point about too many curves - I've straightened the edges and added 'cheek guards' and the icon certainly has a very different feel.

I'll experiment further with ways to incorporate a brush on top, though this might not be as effective head-on as it might be from the side.

Regards, Steve

#116 and #117 have no brushes, but they would be easy to add if you prefer this 'angrier' style of helmet (compare #117 with #112)

It's a little after midnight here and I have to log off. I'm out all day tomorrow from around 9am, which means I'll miss the last couple of hours of your contest. I'll try and log on before I leave - If you have any other ideas you would like me to experiment with, please let me know and I'll try and work on them at that time.

Regards, Steve

entry #114

Could you please add a nose piece to the helmet graphic and increase the size of the comb on top a little (and perhaps make this more rectangular rather than pointed)

Your prompt response would be appreciated as we need to select a winner very shortly.

Thanks and regards

Hello,

At this stage of the contest, only the #1 ranked designer can submit revisions. The only way I (or any other designer) can submit revisions is if you temporarily promote me to #1.

I will make the changes requested so that I am ready to upload them in the event you're able to reshuffle the ranking.

Best regards,

Steve

Thank you... I'm working on them now and will have revisions ready in around 15 minutes.

The new entries are #137, #138, #139 and #140. Each has a slightly different take on the nose piece and comb, with #140 showing a closed-face option.

Please let me know if you would like me to experiment further.

Regards, Steve

Thanks Steve

I really like #137 but please add the comb (brush) from #140.

Regards

I've added #141 and #142.

#141 is #137 with the comb from #140 with no further edits.

#142 is the same, but I've adjusted the width of the nose piece to match the comb for internal consistency.

I know it's getting late where you are but, if you would like to see any more variations, please let me know and I will work on them as quickly as I can.

Best regards, Steve

Hello... and thank you for selecting my design!

I will prepare the files and upload them within the next half hour.

For your reference my email address is steve@explogos.com

Best regards,

Steve

Also...

If you could email me, so that I have your contact info, I'll send the several other file formats directly to you, such as AI, PDF, PNG, etc.