Thanks for the feedback and direction. Really appreciate it. :)
With this submission, I did incorporate some attributes from my Pullboard entry but still making this design unique. The concept is still based from my previous submission #16 but this time, emphasizing the clear nature of the packaging as well as making this variation more colorful.
Let me know if you see potential in this design and I'll be more than happy to update it for you. Thanks in advance for your time reviewing this submission!
What we are looking to show is the item being placed in the packaging looks better/sharper/clearer when it is in the packaging than before. (kinda like if you gloss laminate a picture, colors are move vivid and richer/sharper)
Can we have some options on the item being inserted? Also some font options -on the right track, just want to compare.
Thanks for the feedback and direction. Really appreciate it.
Here's the updated version with the following modifications: 1. changed the font and moved the text to the side of the graphic. 2. the "object" now appears to be clearer when put inside the packaging. 3. to added some personal touch, I added the tag line using a handwriting font.
Thanks. some comments we have been hearing is that it presently looks like a polariod photo and a bit like a travel logo.
The changes have made a difference. however, can we have the main outline of the box thinner and maybe a different way of representing the products being inserted.
Also we prefer a simple or clean text tagline and have the focus still on the main brand name. Also prefer solid colors for the text (rather than gradient fill)