Here is another update as requested. Please note that colors can be altered to your wishes. I have made "On the Rivet" typestyle more edgy and added the sweat droplets to the OTR. I am working a few more ideas that will take some time to complete. I hope to have the other designs uploaded on Friday. Feedback welcome and apreciated.
Kyle, Your work is really good. I currently like the one with the face and so do a lot of my friends. One simple request though. Can you change the grin / smile to more of a grit your teeth kind of look? Otherwise, it is really cool. Thanks for the multiple looks. I am anxious to see your other ideas. One last comment. I like the feeling of forward motion in the face one and the idea that it could transcend to other sports.
I will make the edits shortly. Just a note, I will have limited access over the weekend. My son has a ski race Saturday and Sunday. I will be checking for updates in the evenings. thanks for the feedback.
Kyle, thanks for the info on leaving messages on the general board. I did not understand how it worked and meant no disrespect to you. Sorry. Just a quick question for you. If you win the bid, but we still have a little work to do can we still work together? Again, I am new to this whole deal. Tx, Troy
Absolutely. During the judging mode, only the #1 ranked designer may upload designs. During this period, you may want to move the designers around to fine tune the designs to your vision. After the contest is completed, I am sure most all of the designers will be available to work with you to fine tune (this includes myself). I will provide multiple file formats upon request. I hope to upload a more refined design prior to leaving on Friday. How will the bibs be printed (one Color or multiple color). This is important for me to finish the design process. For jerseys, full color sublimation will be no problem.
Kyle, As far as the face design goes, the new mouth is the look we are after. Maybe just some detail work on the outline and such things. We are going to be a full line clothing company, so race bibs and jerseys are only a small part of the concept. Basically an under armor type line up. Off the cuff, I think we will have to have the ability to use multiple colors and single colors or shades of a particular color........does that make sense? I appreciate your attitude towards this project and at this point anticipate you will win the bid. Good luck at the ski race. I am sure you son will be On The Rivet!
Quick question, is the mouth on my entry #40 more in line of what you are looking for? I should be at a place to work on these changes in the next couple of hours. Sorry for the delay. Race is going well!
not really number 40. I am getting feedback from friends that the current mouth looks like the face you have when a cigar in your mouth. Almost like it is a little too cocky. My hope was just some different ideas on how a gritting cyclist may look. Sorry if I am being to particular and asking for something that cant be done.
I think a metal looking skull like the terminator would look cool. I will be on the trainer for the next few hours, so just do your thing and I will check back then. Thanks for everything.
#74...Changed the mouth a little. I also uploaded several designs using the skull..On entry #70 I started working toward an "Iron Man" mask, however, once I added the the swoosh to the back of the logo it now appears to be more of train "Silver Bullet".. Not sure if this is OK...looks kind of cool none the less.
So far as the mouth is concerned, I am sure we can work through the neccessary changes once the contest is complete. Communication is extremely difficult in this fashion.
#74 - I think you got the mouth right on this one and it is now my favorite choice. Little worried that On The Rivet gets lost. Maybe we can just clean that part up a bit.
I will more than happy to clean up that part of the logo. I am away from my graphic computer, however, I should be back @ work around 9:PM EST. Look for updates shortly. thanks
I have uploaded some changes to the "On The Rivet". If you are not happy with these changes, let me kow and I will make the corrections. I will be more than happy to substitute fonts until you are 100% satisfied with logo. Thanks for the feedback and I will wait for you instructions.