Hello,
I like your design, but was hoping to get a few more looks. Something to get the point across regarding the "all out hard effort" Maybe also try putting the On The Rivet around the OTR kinda like a rivet. I may have messed up when I went to heavy on the "serious" bar. Please see my current rankings. I am not against something kinda fun at this point. Let me know what you think. Thanks.